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		<title>Cordir at 21:44, 15 November 2016</title>
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		<updated>2016-11-15T21:44:22Z</updated>

		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
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				&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; style=&quot;background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;&quot;&gt;Revision as of 21:44, 15 November 2016&lt;/td&gt;
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		<author><name>Cordir</name></author>
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		<title>Cordir: Ode to a Mermaid</title>
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		<updated>2015-10-09T20:55:00Z</updated>

		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Ode to a Mermaid&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;New page&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;div&gt;The Storytelling Amphitheater&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
[Exits: west]&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Strad is here.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
(Intense Light Green Aura) Cordir is here.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair fidgets.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair holds a well-worn mandolin in his hands.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair begins to tune a well-worn mandolin.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Strad appears out of nowhere.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair smiles at Strad.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair smiles at Lady Cordir.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair bows deeply.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair says (in common), 'May I begin?'.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Strad smiles at Foghair.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Cordir nods.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Cordir says, 'You may.'.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Strad sits back.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair bow deeply. &amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair says (in common), 'Thank you all for coming'.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair looks around at the crowd.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair says (in common), ‘I have entitled this, Ode to a Mermaid. It was inspired by two lovely ladies... and the first line is borrowed from Keats, the Bard, and his Nightingale'.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair takes in a deep breath and caresses the worn mandolin in his hands.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair strums a chord on the worn mandolin, then two, then three.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair pauses for a breath.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair speaks, softly...&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
''My heart aches, and a drowsy numbness pains''&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
''My sense attuned, as though her water I have drunk''&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
''Rose tip’d breast, hidden ‘neath her shells''&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
''Unseen, untasted since her daughter was a babe''&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
''Hinted, teased, revealed by daughters carefree garb''&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
''Still all untouched by sands slide thru the glass''&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair strums a chord on the worn mandolin, then two, then three.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair pauses for a breath.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
The Lady Cordir's eyebrow rises slightly.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair blushes slightly.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair speaks, softly...&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
''Sandy cove and shifting dunes, angry crashing waves''&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
''Breathe, relax, reflect, I lay me down to rest''&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
''Youth's sweet laughter giggles forth''&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
''Mother's comb stops at neck''&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
''Please stay, good Sir here in this place''&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
''Good dreams you will be blessed''&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair strums a chord on the worn mandolin, then two, then three.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair pauses for a breath.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair looks around at your faces.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair speaks, softly...&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
''I wake alone, blinking eyes''&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
''No sign of sun kissd head''&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
''No lilting laugh drifts to the skies''&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
''I shake sand from my bed''&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
''A dream all wet, a mouth all dry''&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
''A scream, a sigh, a debt, goodbye...''&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair strums a chord on the worn mandolin, then two, then three.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair takes a deep breath.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair closes his eyes and lowers the mandolin back to his lap.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair bows his head and says, softly, 'Ode to a Mermaid'&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair bows and remains, head down.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Cordir looks thoughtful.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Cordir examines the Bard.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair peeks upwards, head still bowed, a nervous expression on his face.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Cordir says, ‘Interesting, that.'.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Strad smiles happily.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Strad cheers Foghair on, confident that he will win.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Cordir says, 'Strad, what say you?'.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Strad shows his approval by clapping his hands together.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Strad smiles happily and nods.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair takes a sip of water from an antelope hide waterskin.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Strad says (in common), ‘I approve.'.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Strad grins evilly.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair fidgets.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Cordir says, 'very well, then. By audience acclaim…'.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;###&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; Foghair has earned Bards' Council approval for level 5.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair lets out a half a cheer.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Strad grins evilly.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Strad says (in common), 'Congratulations, Foghair.'.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair bows deeply.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair hugs Strad.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair dances around the room, as if with a partner that isn't there.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair chuckles at his own joke, since no one else would.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Cordir shifts back ever so slightly, withdrawing a fraction of a finger's width, at the revelry.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair fidgets some more, without meeting Her gaze.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Cordir says, 'Congratulations, Bard, on your first performance.'.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Foghair says, quietly, 'Did you like it, Lady?'&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Cordir says, 'Something tells Me that future efforts from you are going to be ... '.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Cordir considers a moment.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Cordir says, 'Memorable.'.&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;BR&amp;gt;&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
		<author><name>Cordir</name></author>
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